My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.

Here is Rin Okumura in normal mode:
Here is Rin Okumura in demon mode [Only two flames, the sword looks bad]:
And here is Rin Okumura in demon mode [More flames]:

Looks good! Go ahead and animate it , what anime is this from?

c'mon man, complete it, you could do better than that even if this is your first time.
open it if you like to hear my opinion

Spoiler:

just think 'bout it

Don't know if you will count as a second post but here is Rin Okumuraa bit ''improved?'':

Yeah you should of edited your previous post but his shoes need some working.

yeah, you could double post in your topic, it's called a ~BUMP
yep, i like the new version, he seems more ok
btw, shading is not just linear, try to make clothes folding, make him more real!!
~KIU

(im not good in english too, try to understand these )
it mean you make those clothes more real..look at some sprites, learn from tut...ect and ya will know them =.="

Yeah looks better.

no one could "good" on their first time...this one is alot better than my first work
keep that spirit man, one day you will be our spriter (just may be )

His arms are bit too skinny.

Were giving you tips to help make your sprite better.

Just the left arm.

Kay, here it is: